I don’t want to impose, or to cross the boarder;
I’ve got a piece of advice and nothing more.
Life isn’t a set of words that are well-made;
They don’t make the world slightly better.
You might want to scream or even to roar,
Still, the effect of which will soon fade.
Thinking you’re a predator or a witty hunter
And saying I’m everything, I must be the core.
You must have forgotten, life isn’t just a decade.
Life is one, two decades and may extend further.
Being almost dead, you’d remember the days of yore
And how it came; on the bed, very sick, you laid.
Your proud words cut hearts like a sharp blazer
And the sea of your irritating actions had no shore.
Yet now, you’re an old thing with no title or grade.
Like you’re now above, you’ll be one day under;
You’ll be asked and there works no valor.
Thus, be prepared for it, and with nothing you should trade
Posted 22 July 2010 - 01:41 PM
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Posted 22 July 2010 - 10:04 PM
Wow ,Ive got to say 3lik brother,I thought for a while that i am reading to a great poet!
Posted 23 July 2010 - 07:58 PM
congrats mate, you are one good writer
Be the change you want to see in the world.
Posted 23 July 2010 - 09:10 PM
Shaqiq said "Weeping over past (misdeeds), being afraid of perpetrating a sin again, forsaking the company of evildoers, and adhering to the company of righteousness - these are the hallmarks of a (sincere) repentence."
Posted 24 July 2010 - 05:16 PM
man masha'Allah i have to say that you keep surprising me !! meaningful poem masha'Allah keep it up!!!!
laughing is good but not all the time
Posted 24 July 2010 - 05:31 PM
Thank you all for your encouraging comments