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Learn to be less repetitive, which can be boring and lose the interest of your reader. This is one mistake I see often. Sometimes repeating something can add impact or show the importance of the matter, but this should be used sparingly. Improve you descriptiveness of situations and you make your sentences come alive, become more interesting to the reader and get points across more accurately. Try to find alternative words rather than keep repeating the same ones!
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