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I read this poem earlier Today, and wanted to share it with you guys.....Let us know what you think of it Insha'Allah ^_^




I think and I think but here I sit,
In front of my computer screen, dimly lit.
I peruse my thoughts in search of her,
...And when discovered, my thoughts just wander.

I love her with all of my heart,
But I don't know how to tell her. Where do I start?
So I sit and I think in front of my screen,
But my thoughts seem so meager and lean.

I want her to know how much she means to me,
But it's hard being in love and making the other see.
I felt this way for quite some time now,
And I know I need to tell her but I don't know how.



One idea works in my head,
But I know that it'd be shot down dead.
The perfect scenario, it's in my mind,
But sifting it out, it seems too hard to find.

I interact with her from behind a mask,
But I know, at this point, removing it'll be a task.
I think and I think but what I search for evades me,
And so I sit with my computer screen in front of me.

I can only think about both of us, together,
And how I'd treat her, delicate as a feather,
Dropped from an extinct bird, seemed to be lost in time,
That needs careful attention and can only be mine.

I just want her to realize that she's the world to me
And that she's the only one that will ever be.
I want to hold her in my arms forever,
Sharing our warmth, letting go... never.

I love her with all of my heart,
But I don't know how to tell her. Where do I start?
I want her to know. This I know is true.
But it's hard to say when I'm lost in her eyes and it makes me blue.

I can't tell her, my love is too strong,
Besides, What if she hates me? What if I'm wrong?
So now I sit here, sad and blue,
Wishing we could speak words that lovers do.

I love her with all of my heart,
I want to be with her and never part.
I hope she returns my love
So I pray to the stars above.
I only wish I could make her see
How much her love truly means to me.




~~~ Peace out ~~~


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Wow such beautiful words.. If only they left the computer screen!
What do you think? Should he 'man up' and go confess or just leave it to faith


Thanks sis for sharing.. Really, a beautiful poem ^_^
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What a touching poem it is; amazing. If I were in your place, I wouldn't say a word but to mail her this poem, it would say everything in your stead and vent all your feelings.

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I'm glad you guys liked it... ^_^

What do you think? Should he 'man up' and go confess or just leave it to faith


I think its really hard to have feelings for someone and not now if they feel the same way you do or not.

But I think he should go for it!

It sounds like he's madly in love with her and I think they both deserve him coming clean about it. What if she's the one for him ? It's worth taking the risk of being rejected at least if they're meant to be it would be great for both and if it's not ... then at least he wont spend the rest of his life wondering if it could have been, you know.

Even if she didn't like him b4, I doubt any girl would be able to say No to a guy who wrote this for her :P

I honestly think they're friends, and know each other cuz it sounds like he knows her too well and in order to be in love with someone you have to know their personality and way of thinking and be close to them or at least talked for a while to get to know them well, so they're probably friends or maybe colleagues and he's not sure how to take the next step. :D




If I were in your place, I wouldn't say a word but to mail her this poem, it would say everything in your stead and vent all your feelings.


Yeah, that could work too I think, but if he could send it to her as a letter it would be better, its more intimate than an e-mail and much more romantic. This of course is if he's too shy to tell her in person. :D


~~~ Peace out ~~~



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Yes true.. from all the books I read if I learned something is that people waist so much time speculating if the other loves them and when they finally get together they waist some more time regretting the time they waisted because they didn't face their fears of being rejected or some other hindrances.
So if he has something to tell her he should say it and like you said, Writersfreedom, that would be so romantic.. and if she didn't reciprocate such feelings than she's not the one for him.