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He never had a callous indifference to others' suffering
Even when he was at the zenith of his success enjoying.
What's this inauspicious stand that people were having?!
And what's this devil-may-care-attitude he kept seeing?!
He denounced the ignominious status people put on him
It's been throbbing his body and soul viciously.
There's no solid ground for such an accusation
He was at his wit's end with this eerie aversion.
There he was addressing the mind, not the heart
"Have you ever been ushered to be torn apart?"
His reputation has been stigmatized eminently
His life has been put on hold currently
It's not that he wanted to be euphoric all the time
He just repelled that coarse cynicism; it was so lame.
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very powerful poem, you can feel the intensity of his dilemma in the words you chose, thank you for this
TamattuT nnegh machi ghir i waghrom
Tattali zang u yis wa Traffed' agastur."
The shawi woman isn't just for house work
She rides the horse and carries a sword.

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Thanks sister :)glad you liked it.

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This is very interesting , I very much liked it.
But since my english isn't that good , I had to at least translate a word from each line , but still I really liked it , I wonder who is it about ?
Thank you , for the words that I learned from your poem !
Keep on writing bro , I would like to read more of you.
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Dear eve, it's about someone who was accused for doing something he never did and that made his life miserable. Anyway, the truth always reveals itself, right? smile.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':)' />

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Masha'Allah bro, well written!

Keep up the good work Insha'Allah ...



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What can my enemies possibly do to me? My paradise is in my heart; wherever I go it goes with me, insepa­rable from me. For me, prison is a place of (religious) retreat; ex­ecution is my opportunity for martyrdom; and exile from my town is but a chance to travel ......

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